Monday, October 14, 2013

In Commemoration of A Parting

This is a piece I wrote in school, and I'm publishing it here in commemoration of my grandmother, who passed away four years ago yesterday. 

I had been wearing black. It was kind of ironic, actually, that I was already clothed in the cheerless color. But that day, as I entered my third grade classroom, the clothes weren’t worn sadly, at least not yet. I had dressed up in my older sister’s hand me fuzzy black sweater and my favorite yoga pants. I must have thought I looked cool, like a spy or something. I vividly remember sitting there on the carpet at the end of the day, tall and proud in my “slick” outfit as our teacher read to us.
          I boarded the bus, and as we screeched to a halt and the driver opened the doors with the trademark hiss, I felt something was wrong. My father was standing there, still in his work clothes. That was extremely unusual, as he worked until 5:30 pm and it was only 4. But my younger sister didn’t seem to think much of it, so for a while, neither did I. He probably came home for lunch or something. As we entered the house, my younger sister’s mindless, shrieking chatter still echoing in my ears (as her LOUD shrieks often did), my father cleared his throat.
          “I have some very sad news,” he said.
Oh no. I knew it. Our cat had been getting older and slower. But before I could start shrieking, my father had some more news to deliver.
“Ammi-Ammi (my grandmother) has passed away.”
Looking back on it, it had sounded like he was reading from a script. But how do you really explain the concept of “parting from this world” to those who are only beginning to understand it?
My head began to spin. Dead? My sister and I wore matching expressions of confusion, then, all at once, everything clicked. I dropped my bag down on the floor and walked slowly up to my room, closed the door, and folded up in my red desk chair.
I hope that I will never sob the way I did that day. Ammi-Ammi, my maternal grandmother, was dear to me. She was soft and cuddly, the way all grandmothers are. She was delicate, with small feet and a love for things like flowers, violet perfumes, and fragrant powders. She was feisty and endearingly silly at times. All these things came flooding back to me, and I was suddenly hateful of my black outfit. Why? Whywhywhywhywhy was the question I repeated to myself as I sobbed. After I had cried myself dry, I just sat there. And that is the worst kind of sorrow. When you cry, you at least have something to focus on. But when those tears are dry, you have to face the reason.
After I had collected myself into a reasonable heap of misery, I plonked downstairs and sat in my father’s lap. Just then, my mother came rushing out of her closet. And I will only say one thing: I have only ever been able to put a face to anguish once, and it is hers.



  1. A beautiful piece of your heart, this sharing. It's so you, Hasadri. You've made her whole again for me and I like to think my tears, right now, are made of gratitude. To you. For her too.

  2. It is beautifully and poignantly written, Hasadri. You have a true gift in being able to bring emotions and memories to life through your words.

  3. Tears in my eyes little one. Thanks for sharing your heart with us.

  4. I know how you cherished your grandmother and I can feel the sadness you experienced in losing her. Beautifully written Saucie!

  5. Hasadri, this is very moving. I never got to meet your grandmother but can feel in your words here how special and dear she was - and what it felt like to lose her. Your words make me feel like I know her even so. You write beautifully about what happened in that time for everyone, including your mother at the very end. Thank you for this - and all the writing you do.

  6. Hasadri you are so good at this! I don't want to relate this to my Grandfather's death (because it is entirely different) but I remember that the day he died, my dad also came to wait for me at the bus stop and I knew something was wrong. This is a wonderful piece of writing. I loved your last sentence, and I LOVE PAPERBOATSAILS!!!